I need to flag an issue before publishing anything here.
The source supplied is promotional copy for Boyd's Campground in Key West, a tropical RV park and camping accommodation. It contains no boating or sailing content, no NZ connection, and no facts beyond pool, boat slips, RV sites, rentals, and tiny homes.
There is no article to edit here that would meet Go Boating NZ's editorial standards. Writing a piece "about" this source in a boating or sailing news context would mean inventing facts, names, or events that simply aren't in the text, which breaches the fundamental rule against adding information not present in the source.
A few ways to proceed:
1. If there's a different source article intended for this review (a race report, regatta result, boat launch, or similar), send it through and I'll edit it properly against house style. 2. If Boyd's Campground is genuinely the intended subject, it would need reframing as a short accommodation or destination note rather than a boating news story, and even then there's very little factual material to work with beyond what's already stated. 3. If this was sent in error, the correct source text would let me get started straight away.
Let me know which applies.
